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* top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook
 
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(note: Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
  
 
* page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)"
 
* page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)"
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* top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding."
 
* top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding."
(TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized)
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(note: TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized)
  
 
* page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched.  Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17.
 
* page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched.  Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17.
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* page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2004), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"
 
* page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2004), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"
  
* page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2007" should be 2008! also in body of paper. page numbers in references
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* page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"
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* page 24: add page numbers for "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008" reference
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* page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to " Sommerich, C.M., Starr, H., Smith, C.A., Shivers, C. 2002"
  
* page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to " Sommerich, C.M., Starr, H., Smith, C.A., Shivers, C."
 
  
 
== The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom ==
 
== The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom ==
  
 
* top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook
 
* top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook
(Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
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(note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
  
 
* page 29. Smallwood et. al. should be 2008, not 2007, is correct in references, but needs page numbers.
 
* page 29. Smallwood et. al. should be 2008, not 2007, is correct in references, but needs page numbers.

Revision as of 20:18, 27 December 2007

Corrections to Final Proofs

Composing for Laptop Orchestra

  • top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook

(note: Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)

  • page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)"
  • page 19 left column: in the sentence beginning with "Yet another conducting paradigm...", 'TBA' is the name of the piece, and should be in italics and *not* in quotation marks.
  • top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding."

(note: TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized)

  • page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched. Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17.
  • page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"
  • page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2004), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"
  • page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"

(note the year change to 2008 as well)

  • page 24: add page numbers for "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008" reference
  • page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to " Sommerich, C.M., Starr, H., Smith, C.A., Shivers, C. 2002"


The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom

  • top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook

(note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)

  • page 29. Smallwood et. al. should be 2008, not 2007, is correct in references, but needs page numbers.
  • page 31 right column. capitalize "small musically expressive laptop toolkit" as "Small Musically Expressive Laptop Toolkit"
  • page 34 right column. replace the phrase "internalized the language to the point" with "internalized ChucK to the point"
  • page 36: Under (Misra, Wang, and Cook 2005), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Barcelona"
  • page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"
  • page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2004a), the city should be changed from "New York" to "Hamamatsu"
  • page 38: Under (Wang and Cook 2004b), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"