Difference between revisions of "Plork CMJ"
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* top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook | * top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook | ||
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* page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)" | * page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)" | ||
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* top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding." | * top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding." | ||
| − | (TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized) | + | (note: TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized) |
* page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched. Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17. | * page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched. Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17. | ||
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* page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2004), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami" | * page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2004), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami" | ||
| − | * page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. | + | * page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008" |
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| + | * page 24: add page numbers for "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008" reference | ||
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| + | * page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to " Sommerich, C.M., Starr, H., Smith, C.A., Shivers, C. 2002" | ||
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== The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom == | == The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom == | ||
* top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook | * top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook | ||
| − | (Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music) | + | (note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music) |
* page 29. Smallwood et. al. should be 2008, not 2007, is correct in references, but needs page numbers. | * page 29. Smallwood et. al. should be 2008, not 2007, is correct in references, but needs page numbers. | ||
Revision as of 20:18, 27 December 2007
Corrections to Final Proofs
Composing for Laptop Orchestra
- top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook
(note: Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
- page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)"
- page 19 left column: in the sentence beginning with "Yet another conducting paradigm...", 'TBA' is the name of the piece, and should be in italics and *not* in quotation marks.
- top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding."
(note: TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized)
- page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched. Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17.
- page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"
- page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2004), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"
- page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"
(note the year change to 2008 as well)
- page 24: add page numbers for "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008" reference
- page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to " Sommerich, C.M., Starr, H., Smith, C.A., Shivers, C. 2002"
The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom
- top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook
(note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
- page 29. Smallwood et. al. should be 2008, not 2007, is correct in references, but needs page numbers.
- page 31 right column. capitalize "small musically expressive laptop toolkit" as "Small Musically Expressive Laptop Toolkit"
- page 34 right column. replace the phrase "internalized the language to the point" with "internalized ChucK to the point"
- page 36: Under (Misra, Wang, and Cook 2005), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Barcelona"
- page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"
- page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2004a), the city should be changed from "New York" to "Hamamatsu"
- page 38: Under (Wang and Cook 2004b), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"
