Revision as of 20:53, 27 December 2007

Corrections to Final Proofs

Composing for Laptop Orchestra

• top of page 9: change "Perry Cook" to "Perry R. Cook"

• top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry's name

(note: Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)

• page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)"

• page 19 left column: in the sentence beginning with "Yet another conducting paradigm...", 'TBA' is the name of the piece, and should be in italics and *not* in quotation marks.

• top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding."

(note: TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized)

• page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched. Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17.

• page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"

• page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2004), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"

• page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"

(note the year change to 2008 as well)

• page 24: add page numbers for the above reference, "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"

• page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to "Sommerich, C. M., Starr, H., Smith, C. A., Shivers, C. 2002"

The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom

• top of page 26: change "Perry Cook" to "Perry R. Cook"

• top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry's name

(note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)

• page 29 left column. change (Smallwood et al. 2007) to (Smallwood et al. 2008)

• page 31 right column. capitalize "small musically expressive laptop toolkit" as "Small Musically Expressive Laptop Toolkit"

• page 34 right column. replace the phrase "internalized the language to the point" with "internalized ChucK to the point"

• page 36: Under (Misra, Wang, and Cook 2005), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Barcelona"

• page 37: Under (Smallwood, S., D. Trueman, P. Cook, and G. Wang. 2008), add page numbers

• page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"

• page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2004a), the city should be changed from "New York" to "Hamamatsu"

• page 38: Under (Wang and Cook 2004b), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"