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== Composing for Laptop Orchestra ==
 
== Composing for Laptop Orchestra ==
  
* top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook
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* top of page 9: change "Perry Cook" to "Perry R. Cook"
(Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
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* top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry's name
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(note: Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
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* page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)"
  
 
* page 19 left column: in the sentence beginning with "Yet another conducting paradigm...", 'TBA' is the name of the piece, and should be in italics and *not* in quotation marks.
 
* page 19 left column: in the sentence beginning with "Yet another conducting paradigm...", 'TBA' is the name of the piece, and should be in italics and *not* in quotation marks.
  
 
* top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding."
 
* top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding."
(TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized)
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(note: TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized)
  
 
* page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched.  Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17.
 
* page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched.  Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17.
  
* page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"
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* page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"
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(note the year change to 2008 as well)
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* page 24: add page numbers for the above reference, "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"
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* page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to "Sommerich, C. M., Starr, H., Smith, C. A., Shivers, C. 2002"
  
* page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2004), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"
 
  
* page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2007" should be 2008!
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== The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom ==
  
* page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to "I AM NOT SURE WHAT"
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* top of page 26: change "Perry Cook" to "Perry R. Cook"
  
== The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom ==
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* top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry's name
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(note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
  
* top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook
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* page 29 left column. change (Smallwood et al. 2007) to (Smallwood et al. 2008)
(Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
 
  
 
* page 31 right column.  capitalize "small musically expressive laptop toolkit" as "Small Musically Expressive Laptop Toolkit"
 
* page 31 right column.  capitalize "small musically expressive laptop toolkit" as "Small Musically Expressive Laptop Toolkit"
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* page 34 right column.  replace the phrase "internalized the language to the point" with "internalized ChucK to the point"
 
* page 34 right column.  replace the phrase "internalized the language to the point" with "internalized ChucK to the point"
  
* page 36: Under (Misra, Wang, and Cook 2005), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Barcelona"
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* page 37: Under (Smallwood, S., D. Trueman, P. Cook, and G. Wang. 2008), add page numbers
 
 
* page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"
 
 
 
* page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2004a), the city should be changed from "New York" to "Hamamatsu"
 
  
* page 38: Under (Wang and Cook 2004b), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"
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* page 38: change the publication date for (Wright, Freed, Momeni) from 2004 to 2003.

Latest revision as of 21:41, 27 December 2007

Corrections to Final Proofs

Composing for Laptop Orchestra

  • top of page 9: change "Perry Cook" to "Perry R. Cook"
  • top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry's name

(note: Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)

  • page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)"
  • page 19 left column: in the sentence beginning with "Yet another conducting paradigm...", 'TBA' is the name of the piece, and should be in italics and *not* in quotation marks.
  • top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding."

(note: TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized)

  • page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched. Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17.
  • page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"

(note the year change to 2008 as well)

  • page 24: add page numbers for the above reference, "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"
  • page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to "Sommerich, C. M., Starr, H., Smith, C. A., Shivers, C. 2002"


The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom

  • top of page 26: change "Perry Cook" to "Perry R. Cook"
  • top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry's name

(note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)

  • page 29 left column. change (Smallwood et al. 2007) to (Smallwood et al. 2008)
  • page 31 right column. capitalize "small musically expressive laptop toolkit" as "Small Musically Expressive Laptop Toolkit"
  • page 34 right column. replace the phrase "internalized the language to the point" with "internalized ChucK to the point"
  • page 37: Under (Smallwood, S., D. Trueman, P. Cook, and G. Wang. 2008), add page numbers
  • page 38: change the publication date for (Wright, Freed, Momeni) from 2004 to 2003.