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* page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"
 
* page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"
 
(note the year change to 2008 as well)
 
(note the year change to 2008 as well)
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* page 24: add page numbers for the above reference, "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"
  
* page 24: add page numbers for "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008" reference
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* page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to "Sommerich, C. M., Starr, H., Smith, C. A., Shivers, C. 2002"
 
 
* page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to " Sommerich, C.M., Starr, H., Smith, C.A., Shivers, C. 2002"
 
  
  
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(note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
 
(note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)
  
* page 29. Smallwood et. al. should be 2008, not 2007, is correct in references, but needs page numbers.
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* page 29 left column. change (Smallwood et al. 2007) to (Smallwood et al. 2008)
  
 
* page 31 right column.  capitalize "small musically expressive laptop toolkit" as "Small Musically Expressive Laptop Toolkit"
 
* page 31 right column.  capitalize "small musically expressive laptop toolkit" as "Small Musically Expressive Laptop Toolkit"
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* page 36: Under (Misra, Wang, and Cook 2005), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Barcelona"
 
* page 36: Under (Misra, Wang, and Cook 2005), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Barcelona"
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* page 37: Under (Smallwood, S., D. Trueman, P. Cook, and G. Wang. 2008), add page numbers
  
 
* page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"
 
* page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"

Revision as of 19:25, 27 December 2007

Corrections to Final Proofs

Composing for Laptop Orchestra

  • top of page 9: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook

(note: Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)

  • page 10 change "(Wang et al. 2007)" to "(Wang et al. 2008)"
  • page 19 left column: in the sentence beginning with "Yet another conducting paradigm...", 'TBA' is the name of the piece, and should be in italics and *not* in quotation marks.
  • top of page 20: Figure 17 caption should be changed to "Ge Wang's TBA: orchestral live coding."

(note: TBA is the name of the piece, and should not be italicized)

  • page 20: The images for Figures 16 and 17 are switched. Please switch images for Figures 16 and 17.
  • page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"
  • page 24: Under (Wang and Cook 2004), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"
  • page 24: Please expand "Wang, G., et al. 2007" to "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"

(note the year change to 2008 as well)

  • page 24: add page numbers for the above reference, "Wang, G., D. Trueman, S. Smallwood, and P. Cook. 2008"
  • page 24: Please expand "Sommerich, C. M., et al. 2002" to "Sommerich, C. M., Starr, H., Smith, C. A., Shivers, C. 2002"


The Laptop Orchestra as Classroom

  • top of page 26: add asterisk after dagger after Perry Cook

(note Perry is jointly appointed in Computer Science and Music)

  • page 29 left column. change (Smallwood et al. 2007) to (Smallwood et al. 2008)
  • page 31 right column. capitalize "small musically expressive laptop toolkit" as "Small Musically Expressive Laptop Toolkit"
  • page 34 right column. replace the phrase "internalized the language to the point" with "internalized ChucK to the point"
  • page 36: Under (Misra, Wang, and Cook 2005), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Barcelona"
  • page 37: Under (Smallwood, S., D. Trueman, P. Cook, and G. Wang. 2008), add page numbers
  • page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2003), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Singapore"
  • page 37: Under (Wang and Cook 2004a), the city should be changed from "New York" to "Hamamatsu"
  • page 38: Under (Wang and Cook 2004b), the city should be changed from "San Francisco, California" to "Miami"